Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Memory Vignette about languate for CO301D


We were terrified. My partner and I stood frozen outside the door. Our turn was next. It’d been years since anyone has made it to the final rounds in a speech tournament from our school. We were competing in improvisational pairs. We got our two characters, a brown bear and a polar, and our setting, at the zoo. From this we were to prepare a 7 minute skit with only 5 minutes of preparation time that would be better and well developed than the other 5 teams competing against us. The door opened, “Will the team of Johnson and Click please come in the room,” the judge asked. We entered. The judge gave us the “go ahead” signal and we began. My partner and I glanced at each and just started speaking. We had a rough outline of what we wanted to happen, but the words flowed out of our mouths effortlessly and effectively. No only did we make the judge laugh with some of our jokes and silly phrases, but we also left him with a moral, something to think about. Seven minutes went by quickly and our use of language seemed to guide us through it easily.

Three hours later, and the awards ceremony, they called the 6 of us improve pairs teams up on stage. One by one, starting with 6th place they began to give out awards. As they got down to 2nd place there were only two teams standing; my partner and I, and a team of two boys whom we had befriended. Our whole team awaited anxiously in their seats, holding their breath. I could see my coach was on the edge of her seat. “2nd place, from Lakewood High school, the team of Morris and Smith,” the announcer called.

My partner and I were floored. The next thing we heard was that we got first and we were given our huge first place trophies. My team was on their feet clapping with joy. This was the first award Standley Lake High School’s forensics team had gotten in over six years! Because of our use of language, we were able to bring some fame to our school and make our coach and administrators proud. Our administrators even caved in and gave us some more funding for tournament fees and we were able to buy team t-shirts. Once the rest of our school had seen what could be done in the Speech team through language, more and more people joined. That year there were eight members of the Speech Team. Today I went back to visit and the team is now up to well over thirty members!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jessica!

    Great job building suspense in this vignette--I was rooting for you and your partner to win right until the last paragraphs! What a great way to use language for personal achievement and also to help your school gain more funding for future Forensics competitors.

    I could really relate to your post because freshman year of high school, my two best friends and I performed a group interpretation piece from The Three Faces of Eve, an account of a woman with three personalities. At one point, I got to let out a huge scream as the personalities merged into one--this woke up the whole auditorium of students!

    I'd love to see your zoo skit:)

    Erika (from Writing in the Disciplines)

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  2. This is definately one of the better pieces of writing that I have read so far in this class! I was very impressed by the way that you started right in the middle of the action, and kept the writing exciting througout. Speech is not a subject that I would have thought I would be interested in, but I am after reading this. Great Job! Caitlin

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